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Through Wintertree Forest

Published: Nov 27, 2012

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Description

Many wanted to see my do a forest. I've never really done trees before, so this is where I decided to start. I may do more advanced trees in the future, but for this piece, I feel these trees do their job well. This is another one of my pieces where the story is up to you this time

Credit to

for the Fluttershy vector

Image size

1920x1080px 2.74 MB

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Reginald1648

Nov 28, 2012

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact

Okay, so we have a piece that is experimenting a little, and it came out well.

First off, very good job with the light directional shadowing with Fluttershy. You are correct that slightly improved trees could be used, but over all their quality is good given the resources at hand. The use of trees really boosts your originality.

For impact I went a little lower because I found that Fluttershy's somewhat timid facial expression was not matching her posture given her environment. If I was the shy pegasus, looking at someone from behind a tree, I would be leaning back behing the tree a little.