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Raining Tears

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A variation of one of my first MLP wallpapers , you could think of this as the remastered version. I did the first one when I was just starting out wallpapers, and before I had my cloud brushes. I felt like the "Journal" theme for this image didn't really fit well with the wallpaper. So, I re-did it. This new one is extremely basic in terms of design and what I usually do, but rather than the setting/scene, I put all my emphasis on the lighting in this piece. I hope you like it!
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Credit to :iconsecret-pony: for the awesome Derpy Image used in this piece.
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

Absolutely beautiful.
I love the drawing style: it's unique, and one of the best I have seen!

The sun on the left gives a bright glare which distracts from the focus of the scene, which should be Derpy. Another option would be to change it to a moon, which would fit the doleful nature of the piece. Either way, it distracts from the piece. Besides, the shading is wrong if the sun were in the background as you drew it. Derpy's face would be in shadow.

I would make the cloud she is sitting on (mostly the outline thereof) a little more distinct, and her body a bit less covered by cloud. (Only a bit - the focus should still be on her face (which was an excellent choice, stylistically))